假设你是某中学的学生李华,有意申请成为伦敦奥运会志愿者。请按下列提示,写一份申请书。提示:1. 自我介绍(姓名,18 岁男生,来自杭州某中学,学习英语十年,英语口语流利);2. 曾是北京奥运会志愿者,富有经验。

一、范文
Dear sir or madam,
①I have read your poster for recruitingvolunteers and I'd like to recommendmyself with reasonsas follows.
②My name is Li Hua, an 18-year-old student from ×× High School, who have obtained considerable proficiency in English through a decade's learning.
③Above all, enthusiastic and outgoing, I myself am a young man always ready to offer hands to others.
④Additionally, I once participated in Beijing Olympic Games of 2008, familiarizing myself with the procedure thanks to the considerable experience.
⑤High value attached to the chance, I would be extremely grateful if I am honored to be given the privilege.
二、解析
1. recruit招聘
2.with reasons作方式状语,修饰 recommend,说明“推荐”的方式是“附上理由”
3. as follows固定搭配,意思是“如下”,用于引出下面要列举的内容。它没有单复数变化,永远用 follows
4.“an 18-year-old student from” 是同位语,推荐使用。
5.obtain great proficiency in English 获得很高的英语熟练度
6.“a decade” 代替 “ten years”。
7 “familiarizing myself with”,用现在分词引导结果状语。
8.常用连词:above all = to begin with = firstly;additionally = besides = moreover = furthermore = what's more = in addition;in conclusion = to sum up。
9.High value attached to the chance 独立主格,相当于Because high value is attached to the chance
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