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2019年南京、盐城一模英语作文详解!本篇作文应该怎么写?

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2019年南京、盐城一模英语作文详解!本篇作文应该怎么写?

  概括:

  本文属于现象——反应类议论文,此类概括文分为两个部分:现象是什么?反应是什么?

  现象:体育课很重要但被忽略(至于如何重要,如何被忽略,都不要写了)

  Sports classes are ignored though are very important.

  进一步浓缩:

  Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools.

  (Despite…, …这是非常通用的概括现象类句式)

  反映:图表的核心词是:不满(只能看主要的数据表现,这不是描述图表,所以要反应趋势),政府是采取措施,不用说措施的主要内容了。

  More than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction with the sports classes. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it.

  和上文合并浓缩:

  Despite sports classes’ great importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools, with which more than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it. (32个词)

  要点一:

  原因可以从内因和外因考虑:

  1.应试教育,所以学习压力大 –》举例:作业多(结果)牺牲体育课

  2.体育设施不好

  It is the exam-oriented system that is to blame for the problem. Heavy academic pressure burdens students with endless homework, forcing them to sacrifice sports classes. Also, the poorly-equipped sporting facilities make it hard for students to like PE class. This is the reason why the sports class is losing its appeal.

  要点二:

  措施:这种公共性的现象一般都是从三个角度写,我第一时间随意写了这些点,算是大脑风暴吧,然后从中找逻辑关系,进行取舍。

  2. 政府:a factor for enrollment, encourage schools to put …in the first place

  个人:strengthen their health, make the most of, build teamwork spirit

  学校:instead of …, give high priority to, enough time should be allocated to…, facilities

  总结:In fact, sports classes contribute to academic improvement, feel energetic and motivated

  最终成文:

  The following tips, if adopted, will surely work. First, along with the government’s measures, schools should invest in sports facilities and PE teachers’ training. Only when PE is given due attention to, can students embrace it free of worries. Besides, students need to promote the awareness that sports classes will not backfire on them, but rather refresh them in study.

  Undoubtedly, with the combined efforts, the sports class can inspire students’ passion and serve its purpose.

  backfire (have opposite effect) «plan, scheme» 事与愿违

  backfire on [somebody] 对某人产生适得其反的效果

  完整的段落:

  Despite sports classes’ importance, they were heavily ignored in middle schools, with which more than 60% of students surveyed expressed dissatisfaction. In response, the government has taken measures to solve it. (31个词)

  It is the exam-oriented system that is to blame for the problem. Heavy academic pressure burdens students with endless homework, forcing them to sacrifice sports classes. Also, the poorly-equipped sporting facilities make it hard for students to like PE class. This is the reason why the sports class is losing its appeal.

  The following tips, if adopted, will surely work. First, along with the government’s measures, schools should invest in sports facilities and PE teachers’ training. Only when PE is given due attention to, can students embrace it free of worries. Besides, students need to promote the awareness that sports classes will not backfire on them, but rather refresh them in study.

  Undoubtedly, with the combined efforts, the sports class can inspire students’ passion and serve its purpose. (125个词)

  词块:

  in reponse作为反应

  exam-oriented system应试制度

  burden ... with...给……施加负担

  be to blame for...是……的原因

  lost its appeal失去吸引力

  invest in投入

  give due attention to对……足够的重视

  embrace接受

  be free of worries没有担忧

  promote the awareness提高意识

  backfire on sb对……不利

  not...but rather...不是……而是相反,……

  refreshsb使人精神抖擞

  inspire one's passion激发热情

  serve one's purpose达到目的

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