2018年卷高考英语作文示例,为你分析作文的写作思路!
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  提升高考英语作文分数的一个很好的方法就是去参考历年的高考英语作文,分析作文的写作思路,积累作文的得分句式!本文,小编为大家分享2018年卷高考英语作文示例,各位的高中生,上后收藏起来吧,方便后期学习!

  试题回顾

  书面表达(25分)

  请阅读下面文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

2018年卷高考英语作文示例,为你分析作文的写作思路!
 

  【写作内容】

  1.用约30个词概括上述利用排名( ratings)进行消费的现象;

  2.谈谈你如何看待消费排名,然后用2-3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

  【写作要求】

  1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

  2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

  3.不必写标题

  【评分标准】

  内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

  【思路点拨】

  今年作文仍然是读写作文,即先用30词概括阅读材料,然后针对材料中的话题写一篇议论文谈看法。首先要认真阅读两段有关消费排名现象及观点的纯文字材料,然后进行比较和分析,表明态度,作出价值判断。

  文章首段要简要介绍两段材料,第一段材料为一对母子买旅行箱看了网上的评论,结果买回来的旅行箱质量很好。第二段材料为一帮人去餐馆吃饭,看了on-line rating,结果饭菜很不好吃,从而凸显出online rating的不靠谱。

  然后写你对online rating的看法,表明观点,注意用2-3个论据来支撑自己的看法。

  文章属于议论文,要注意主题句的使用,论点之间要注意有条理。文章可主要采用一般现在时,第三人称来写。

  【范文】

  Possible version one:

  As a major channel of consumption information, the rating is an efficient source of information for shopping in our own consumption. Interestingly, the same rating may have different influences on different consumers.

  There is no doubt that it is unwise to depend completely on the ratings in consumption. The advantages and disadvantages of ratings are often closely related. It is necessary to hold an objective attitude towards ratings.

  Possible version two:

  Nowadays, most commodities or services are rated through certain channels. These ratings, easy to access, are playing an increasingly important role in customers' purchase decision. However, results are sometimes unsatisfactory.

  There is no denying that such ratings might bring convenience to consumers, but they are often misleading and unreliable. As we all know, most of the ratings are based on others’ judgment on the product or service concerned. Every judgment comes from a specific need or a unique psychological state. Apparently, blindly following others' advice will affect our own judgment. Another fact should not be neglected that some of the ratings are the outcome of a careful manipulation of companies or sellers. It has become a common practice for some to pay

  for good ratings on their products or services so as to increase their sales.

  Therefore, we should give a second thought to these ratings whenever we go shopping.

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